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Friday, October 24, 2008

Poetry Friday - Sixth Sense!

Mona says this is the Sixth Sense today for Poetry.
Here's one take on it anyway:
for one split second
you know the scene
and swear that all
has already been
seen it before
it's nothing new
eerie vibes
this deja vu
a fleeting sense
of what once was
it makes you think
that all one does
is echoed from
a long time past
contrived just as
the die is cast
this tapestry
of life it weaves
a constant thread
that never leaves
connecting us
to all there is
and ties us to
the world that's His

12 Comments:

Blogger Rapunzel said...

I love this one! sigh...

Friday, October 24, 2008

 
Blogger Clowncar said...

Nice! Strong sense of meter (a pet peeve of mine is sloppy meter!).

Friday, October 24, 2008

 
Blogger Chase Bjørnsen Ravndal said...

Hello dearest Ruth! I am so happy to be back here and also hear your inspiring song everytime when I came and visit your blog. Anyway, I can somewhat relate to this poetry coz there are times I do experience these kind of thing and yes it is really eerie! Have a nice weekend btw!

Saturday, October 25, 2008

 
Blogger Jannie Funster said...

Mr Dejavu... haven't I seen you somewhere before? (Remember that from that show "Top Secret?" hilarious.)

Sunday, October 26, 2008

 
Blogger fennymun said...

lovely post. sixth sense ~ how I wish I could sense it to predict what'll happen next... (what a day-dream...)

Sunday, October 26, 2008

 
Blogger Akelamalu said...

You summed Deja Vu up so well in that poem.

Monday, October 27, 2008

 
Anonymous colleen said...

And sometimes I get jamaisvu http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jamais_vu when everything seems like you never did it before.

Tuesday, October 28, 2008

 
Blogger storyteller said...

Sorry I’ve not visited in a while but I’m doing what I can to catch up today. You know I love your poetry … and this captures ‘déjà vu’ marvelously.
Hugs and blessings,

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