Harmony
For Teri over at Coffee Breath for Poetry Friday ...the subject was harmony...
harmony
sweet notes
on a page
in your voice
on the stage
in your heart
in a marriage
from the start
dueting your way through life
Mother of Invention,waxing poetic, as she is wont to do....
posted by Mother of Invention at 7:03 AM
14 Comments:
I really enjoy the use of prepositions to start each line in the middle. Nice way to give harmony to the poem about harmony.
Friday, June 30, 2006
Brooksba: Thanks! To be honest, I hadn't really noticed that pattern until you said that!!! It's just a broken type format I like to use...like the short lines and the way it looks on the page. I love that centre button! Makes it look way better than the old back to the left margin stuff! You have artistic talent and I have not. I guess any lies in my poetry as you can see on my blogs. Check some old ones out whenever the mood strikes! Thanks again.
Friday, June 30, 2006
You shoulda said you did it on purpose! Ah well, you are just naturally brilliant.
Friday, June 30, 2006
You're right, Bobealia! Sometimes you think authors contrive so many intricate things and half the time, even the great writers don't!! THANKS!
Friday, June 30, 2006
Too late, you nutty Bobbabe! I'm onto you now..shouldna told me! HA! Fun eh?!
Friday, June 30, 2006
That IS good!
Friday, June 30, 2006
Oh lovely! I immediately thought of my husband and how I love his voice!
Friday, June 30, 2006
Diana: Thanks so much! I love writing poetry..I'm a junkie!
Mona: Thanks! Glad you it evoked a close connection! You are lucky to have a husband with a beautiful voice. I sing a lot too and write the odd song. (and fake it on the guitar! Mostly for Gr. 1, 2, and 3!)
Friday, June 30, 2006
clap, clap, clap, clap!
Encore!
Friday, June 30, 2006
Thanks, Teri! I like this idea! Fun!
Friday, June 30, 2006
Two or more notes together are always more interesting than just plainsong. What a great poem!
Saturday, July 01, 2006
Barbara: Thanks! You are so right, unless, of course, it is one beautiful bird's song! Then. it is simply melodious!
Saturday, July 01, 2006
Beautiful.....just beautiful!!
Saturday, July 01, 2006
Robin: Thanks! I always liked to sing harmony! (am 2nd soprano in my choir!)
Saturday, July 01, 2006
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