Poetry Friday/Saturday! "Hide"
Poetry Friday became Saturday! Mona gave the word, "Hide". Two entries today!
hidden discovery
cover your eyes
i'm counting
hide-and-go-seek
game of life
but you'll never find me -
(heck, I'M still looking!)
deep inner thoughts
sometimes hidden from me
i even sleep in a hide-away bed
camouflaged slumber
in my escape place
ever searching
for
The Clue To The Hidden Treasure
a new Nancy Drew
i'm the ghost writer
but
i can't even read it
or crack the code
to solve the mystery
of me
Take #2!
me
concealed
sheltered
shielded
protected
out of sight
obscured
unexplained --
no wonder i can't find myself
posted by Mother of Invention at 2:13 PM
13 Comments:
Oh, I love hide-away beds! The promise of sleep under your bottom whilst you watch Wheel of Fortune and old Betty Davis movies....
Saturday, March 03, 2007
Totally fun! When I thought of hide, I imagined the way keys/socks/cell phones always seem to disappear.
Sunday, March 04, 2007
whoa. deep.
Sunday, March 04, 2007
You seem pretty open for a hidden person. I like the Nancy Drew reference.
Sunday, March 04, 2007
I love them! You did a super job w/ those poems.
(heck, I'M still looking!) I love that part.
I used to write poetry. Maybe I should start again. Hmmm...
Sunday, March 04, 2007
Mona:They are so cool and I've never sen one in real life...was one on Oprah recently!
Brooksba: Yes, certainly that! I also thought of, "I'm going to tan your hide, boy!"
Gr: Yerah, I had to go down the mine shaft for this one!
Meno:Yes, you're right, I was just reaching in a universal type wayfor this. Must be true for some though.
Abigail: Thanks. You should try it some Friday. Get the word at Mona's every Thurs.
Monday, March 05, 2007
I especially liked take#2. we all have our inner selves that are all of those things. for some of us, though, those describe our outer selves too. it's why it sometimes takes a lifetime to figure out who we are.
Monday, March 05, 2007
Thank you for stopping by my blog and I do hope you stop by again. Thank you for remembering my sister in your prayers. I love the song you are playing.
Monday, March 05, 2007
Bob: You got that right! That's why I said in the first one that I was still looking! You're never done growing into who you are I guess.
Starry Nights: You're welcome and thanks, that song is my own that I wrote and recorded. (I posted the words on a previous post)
Monday, March 05, 2007
Very cool.
Tuesday, March 06, 2007
lovely words
Tuesday, March 06, 2007
Hi MoI girlfriend -
I love both editions.........I loved Nancy Drew as a child.....she helped me 'hide' from a difficult childhood......but I also like the second, more elusive version (of course....considering my own proclivities.....) great work, as always.....!!
xxxx
rdg
Tuesday, March 06, 2007
Maggie and Coll: Thanks!
RDG: Thanks..they both came Spilling Out but weren't really connected so I had to separate them. I can do stream-of-consciousness thoughts more easily than the kind of ideas that have to be placed very carefully. You do that really well!
Tuesday, March 06, 2007
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